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YOUTHFUL MANIPULATION
Contributed by
jaeann
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The innocent prodding from a fatherless child.....
"Please mister.....can I call you Papa?"
"Will you pull my wagon home for me....in plain view of cruel friends....to prove I am ..... I can be a "Daddy's Girl" too?"
"How do I ask you to stay without begging....
please play games with me.....the tossing game! That one is fun and Mama can't do it!"
"Oh, mister.... can I sqeal with delight as we chase around the tree?....when Mama is tired can you teach my to ride my bicycle?"
"Can I call you Papa and will you love me forever and never leave?...I'll be a good enough girl for Mama....so she'll stay happy........stay well....make you happy enough to be my Papa?"
"Just tell me what to do....what to say....."
"Oh mister.....will you please be my Papa today?"
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jaeann
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2003-09-18 10:45:00]
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Re: YOUTHFUL MANIPULATION
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:55:14 AM AEST
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How sad indeed that our children have to look for paternal love from strangers
good write
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Re: YOUTHFUL MANIPULATION
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:41:42 PM AEST
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Jaymee, I hope this didn't happen to you, but I'm inclined to think it did!
Children have a way of thinking that if only they will be good....then everything around them will be too! Cruel Adults take advantage of this....I'm so sorry Jaymee....Your eyes are wide open as to what not to do!
That's how we can stop this horrid cycle....
Beautiful poem, quite different, loved the style...like a little child would write....
Warm Hugs and Love,
Connie |
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Re: YOUTHFUL MANIPULATION
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:52:59 PM AEST
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| unbelievable where you send my heart, and set my feelings. Crow |
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Re: YOUTHFUL MANIPULATION
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:10:30 PM AEST
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Now I know this was listed as emotional poetry.This stirred emotions inside!
Excellent job!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: YOUTHFUL MANIPULATION
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by venkat on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 05:42:42 AM AEST
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This left me speechless..the poem draws a real picture of an innocent girl...such girls will finally become victims in the hands of society
venkat |
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