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No you can't play outside
Contributed by
walt
on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When rain falls on a child
a smile appears
in that moment
an adult sees a tear
The calling voice of age
does not let us be
in this a simple act
our fears we see
Quickly I hurry down the hall
I heard my child call
but my Childs been died nearly
twenty years still that voice
I hear
Oh lord in silence of heaven above
could you please let me send love
let me answer the call of my child
I promise not to be long
I will not interrupt her heavenly song
I just want her to know I am here
waiting for that little smile
a bit of rain and a tear
I would let her out in the snow
Lord I just want to hold her close
once more, I promise not to be long
Down the hall you
call my name
your voice
telling me about the rain
a smile and tear
Arms round my neck
kiss upon my cheek
Finally tear laden sleep
Copyright ©
walt
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2003-09-19 00:45:00]
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Re: No you can't play outside
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:54:29 AM AEST
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You were certainly right when you said to me that you write of various messages within one poem :)
This brings tears,longing,understanding,tears,vivid imagery,regret,tears..Its just wonderful..
Did I mention it brought tears?? ;) |
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Re: No you can't play outside
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 08:42:39 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhh this is full of beauty, longing,wonder all sorts of emotions wrapped into one, yes it brought a tear to my eye also. Enjoyable touching write.
michelle |
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Re: No you can't play outside
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by AppleScruffs on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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| im really not sure exactly how to comment on this poem.. it is beautiful, emotional, loving, and more.... |
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