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Crystal Clear
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Am I not empty enough
Could my heart not be filled with rose petals
Like carpet for royalty
Where you could walk to me...
I would bow before your love
Offering my all,my soul to you
Am I not cold enough
Could these fields of wildflowers not dance in your sunlight
Blanketed by your warmth
Where your breath like a summers breeze
Kisses tall grass and colours my dreams
Of you,your nearness
Am I not withered enough
Could my thirst not be quenched by your sweet wine
Like a river of blood
New life coursing my veins...
I would live for your love
Nurture you,while nurtured
Am I not clear enough
Could your eyes not be opened by my faith
Like visions in a crystal ball
Unreal and yet mesmerizing
You are clouded by my tears
For you,I will keep dreaming,hoping
Am I not enough??
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Walt on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:46:29 PM AEST
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Enjoyed, great write...
walt |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:10:33 PM AEST
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again a very beautiful write
Shari |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Crow on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:28:00 PM AEST
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| I really like this,good work, Crow |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:30:18 PM AEST
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| Amazing poem! |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 09:49:08 PM AEST
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| I like the way you structured this poem ... all of the words touched my heart very deeply ... "for you, I will keep dreaming, hoping" ... *sobs in anguish* :(((( Jan |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Percursors on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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OH MY GOD! I LOVED THIS IT WAS SO AMAZING...
*gives you a standing ovation* |
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