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HARVEST
Contributed by
jaeann
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Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost in the darkness;
Elusive light;
Tears are falling.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-09-20 13:45:00]
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Re: HARVEST
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by Night_Child on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 01:46:24 PM AEST
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| That was a powerful poem, I've read some of your others, you truly are a great poet! |
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Re: HARVEST
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 03:23:54 PM AEST
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Great imagery!!
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Re: HARVEST
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 05:59:33 PM AEST
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strong, sounds familar to me ::sigh::
good write
Shari |
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Re: HARVEST
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by painted_echos on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 06:49:40 PM AEST
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| crow was right, when he said you were 'red hot'. i think sometimes we need the dark, but i hope you won't be there long. m |
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Re: HARVEST
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by Crow on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 07:42:15 PM AEST
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| that just says everything, Crow |
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Re: HARVEST
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST
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Jaymee that was wonderful.
Is that a stab at the Haiku?
I wish I knew how to do that too!
I'm afraid of the dark Jaymee
I have to have light inorder to see
But that's what is so good about you...
You can live in both worlds and come through!
lovingcritters
Connie |
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Re: HARVEST
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:08:19 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful title!...falling of tears is the harvest!!!...very sharp.. venkat |
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