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UNWANTED CHILD
Contributed by
Kane
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Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
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Bought into this world by a 13 year old little girl,
Concieved by force, by a man driving a porsch,
He was so nice, you couldn't ask for more, then he slammed you into the door,
He ripped off your dress, now your depressed,
Beaten and bloody you couldn't move, he had his way in the living room,
Mom and dad were gone for the weekend, you thought you'd invite your friend,
Nine month months later out I came, out of anger you named me Kane,
Unwanted child, when you looked into my eyes, you saw his smile,
So by the dark of the moon, you slipped out of your room,
Threw me in a trash can, and you cursed that man,
As I cried you covered your ears wishing I would die,
You ran home, leaving me to face this world alone,
Raised by a stranger, trying to deal with this pinned up anger,
I didn't ask to be born, but I guess every rose has it's trone,
Mother I want you know I still love you, but I could never forgive you,
Dad I hope that was the best sex you ever had,
When I find you I will cut your troat, laughing while you choke,
Mother why did you aboned me, I did nothing but love you can't you see,
You will curse the day you left me to die, next time I'll be the one to say goodbye,
I'm sorry you were raped, but what can you do, my revenge shall fall upon you.
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2003-09-20 20:35:00]
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by Kalika on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 08:43:24 PM AEST
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holy WOW!! sooo deep and vivid. ur incredibly talented, keep 'em coming
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:19:13 AM AEST
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Oh so so so sad Kane. Awesome write although it is heartbreaking and your words so true. I hope that you are okay and take care.
Emma. |
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 11:29:55 AM AEST
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OMG, Kane this was some piece of work, so deep, and yet so true, You have great talent, bringing such a horrible subject to life like this. Great write.
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 10:50:31 PM AEST
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OMG Kane...this is the BEST write I've had the privilege of gracing my eyes upon... You have excelled with this write.. Don't ever stop.
This was so deep and so well done...
It deserves a big (((HUG))) *wink*
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:59:52 AM AEST
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| oh sweetheart....i am so very sorry.......how sad and courageous!!!!!! |
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:36:05 AM AEST
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| mmm how sad, i hope you find peace in your heart and soul and can forgive them for what they did, abandoning you and such a way to be conceived, it will hurt you to hang on to this anger my friend, but believe me my heart goes out to you, very moving poem here, big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: UNWANTED CHILD
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 11:21:00 PM AEST
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| Kane I am sorry this happen to you. Did you ever think maybe she didn't know how to face the fact that you looked like the man who raped her |
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