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The Phantom Of YPDC
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
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Under all the poetry, lies an icy sea,
The many levels of emotions, sits a masked man rarely seen,
He's called The Phantom, the question is can he be found,
YPDC is his home, but he resides under her ground,
For three years his poured out his soul, but poetry is something he can never let go,
Down here it's a bit dark, searching through the tunnels of his heart,
He finds his way through the darken caves, looking for the light of day,
Alone he sits in a throne fit for a king, but without poetry he isn't a thing,
In the shadows he hides, hopeing none will ever find,
The Phantom Of YPDC, the mask or the man behind,
Silently he writes, listening to the voices that haunt his nights,
A soft voice in the distants calls to him and commands his full attention,
The voice is that of his lady, opening her heart so he can be free,
Who is this mystery man, the one that hides behind a mask,
Scared to show his face, haunted by his past,
His blood is his ink, he writes what he thinks,
Another page is turned, This Phantom has returned,
Some say he never left, other don't like him and so they disrepect,
But in his world the only thing that matters is his wife and his little girl,
He is The Phantom Of YPDC, but you know some may disagree.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2003-09-21 08:05:00]
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:45:55 AM AEST
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This is really very good. I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 10:17:08 AM AEST
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Hi Phantom, you are one of the poets who go back with me three years and I have such deep respect for you and your poetic words. Welcome home!! (tho I never saw it as if you left) Love to read your work and always will...Keep in touch...
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:28:18 PM AEST
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Welcome home dear friend glad to see you back for when your not around your poetry I lack, then I get a bit sad!! I hope all is going well for you my friend.
michelle |
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:52:28 PM AEST
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Your priorities you have straight, your poetry is first rate...so glad to have you back
Shari |
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:57:08 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your great comments, I am home here and will never leave, your the reason I keep writing, I love you all, and thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:06:34 PM AEST
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| This is a very good write ... hopefully now you've come home you'll find some peace ... Jan |
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 11:14:21 PM AEST
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| Oh How pleased I was to see this from you,you were missed! Glad to see you came back cant wait to read more! Christina |
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:51:51 AM AEST
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Yea.."He is The Phantom Of YPDC"..
without a mask reflected in clear mirror. venkat |
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:52:52 AM AEST
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Dear Phantom,
I"m new here at your YPDC, but certainly did enjoy your poetry!
I love imaginations like yours....they soar!
I followed you all over, in and out of every door!
I, too am glad you are back, just reading one of your poems I know you have no lack
for making your readers hearts glow....with emotions and smooth words of flow.
Enjoyed your poem very much
lovingcritters
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Re: The Phantom Of YPDC
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:12:42 AM AEST
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| beautiful matt, hugs n' love nessa:) |
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