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Fire Within
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
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Chained to emotion never felt,
love she holds, loves constant battle.
A fire within, a fire not felt.
Frail the wings that carries her heart.
The passion I hold, some say dark,
I see her like no other.
I wish that breeze, to fill her heart,
loves fire to come to her.
in broken dreams, the passion true,
I`ll hold her while she mends.........Crow
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Re: Fire Within
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 04:03:00 PM AEST
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sesational write, you have a very lucky friend, and I know she appreciates you ever so much
Shari |
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Re: Fire Within
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 04:05:01 PM AEST
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| Dear Crow, I am happy to be the first to read your poem. I liked it, but in fairness to you, I did not give you a vote. I truly don't know if I can say whether it is good poetry or not. You write with a unique 'voice'. I liked it. You are are real and perhaps a different culture than my own. I thought the last line, "I'll hold her while she mends..." was a sincere and loving thought. Good luck to you. Bizzy |
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Re: Fire Within
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by shelby on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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lucky friend you have here to have a friend like you
michelle |
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Re: Fire Within
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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| Sincerity of heart shines through here ... lovely write ... Jan |
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Re: Fire Within
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:06:54 PM AEST
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| ooo, this is nice!! |
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Re: Fire Within
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:09:00 PM AEST
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| I'm "anonymous"... I wasn't logged in.. sorry! |
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Re: Fire Within
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 10:04:35 PM AEST
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| And mend she will..you are a healer of souls Your friend is very blessed.This is very beautiful :) |
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Re: Fire Within
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:56:20 AM AEST
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| very nice to read..welldone. venkat |
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Re: Fire Within
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:20:18 AM AEST
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Crow this was a very touching poem as I read it through.
So Loving, so kind, so empathatic and understanding too.
To have a friend like you Crow would be such a blessing....no one would ever have to cry alone....and with your comfort, yes, there's no doubt she will heal!
Beautiful poem Crow, just beautiful!
lovingcritters |
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Re: Fire Within
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:14:16 AM AEST
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| i'll hold her while she mends........whew!!!! yes....... |
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Re: Fire Within
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:22:08 AM AEST
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| very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Fire Within
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 09:36:12 PM AEST
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what a loving and nurturing spirit you have - your friend is lucky to have a friend like you-
this is a really heartfelt write.
merry |
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