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From My Sleep
Contributed by
chuckx
on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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I took a peek this morning
from the dark cave of loneliness;
my eyes hurting from your smiles.
I didn't think I could come to you
without an offering.
But my heart warmed
with a "wonderful fall"
from a friend
a fall that would catch
in your arms, your hearts
to bring light into darkness.
It is only my dark spirit
that betrays enlightenment;
pulling me from you
to bask in the lone walk
beneath rhyme and words,
stalking my existence.
But you deserve more;
my love
that yearns to break
into the day
from dark obscurity
into the arms that wonderfully
catch me
from my falling sleep.
Copyright ©
chuckx
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2003-09-21 17:35:00]
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Re: From My Sleep
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:12:17 AM AEST
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How romantic and touching your poem is.
I loved reading it through....especially the part about breaking from the dark.....into the arms
that wonderfullyu catch you....from falling asleep..Wonderful line....
Great Write.
Really enjoyed it!
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