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A Most Magical Evening
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
on
Friday, 16th August 2002 @ 07:43:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Faeries watching, dancing in the twilight on leaves still wet from the afternoon showers, flickering past in the corner of your eye just enough to make you look. But still you convince yourself it was really nothing and go on with your walk, holding hands with a girl youve known for only a few weeks, enraptured by the tales of youth and innocence that glide from her elegant lips and carry your eyes skyward to the perfect tranquility of the heavens while you, with impeccable timing, relate the stories of the twenty or so constellations that you made up when you were still young enough to sit in the grass. And you point out the residents of your astral city, the cook, the fireman, the dinosaur, the pirate, before you look again at her delicate face and the twinkle in her eye, that belittles even the great Betelgeuse, again captures and warms your soul. Those gem-like eyes, coupled with that soft and innocent face, reminiscent of a young doe, lapping her life-drink from a crystalline stream, are the sole focus of the evening and succeed in keeping you perfectly distracted while a dozen sprites, still just out of reach for your eyes, sprinkle their sacred pollen over your heads as the fog rolls in and you and your perfect girl drift away into the moonlight into the land of elves and dragons where the hearts deepest desires are certain to come true. You sit with her on a tree branch in some magical forest as she floats off to cloud cuckoo land right there in your arms. You know. You have been blessed. With love. And with eternal happiness. For now, you know. The two are but the same.
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Re: A Most Magical Evening
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Friday, 16th August 2002 @ 11:19:16 PM AEST (User
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Love and fantasy...magic ingredients. I love this and its beautiful imagery.
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Re: A Most Magical Evening
(User Rating: 1 ) by starlight on
Saturday, 17th August 2002 @ 12:37:26 AM AEST (User
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If only the whole world could be this way. Absolutely beautiful. |
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Re: A Most Magical Evening
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th August 2002 @ 07:26:22 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful!!! I loved the imagery here...
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