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Man and Wife loved
Contributed by
walt
on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Out of the dark of pleasant sleep
Aroused by the passion I keep
Buried deep inside
I taste the beauty of your pride
Warmth it grows
Like your body and mine
Shallow breathe falls
Across my body
Cool like fallen snow
Love's passion started
Slowly burning
Night is departed
Sun and love
They intertwine
Day light she is mine
Out of the dark
of pleasant sleep
openly she seeks
Passion
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2003-09-21 20:05:00]
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Re: Man and Wife loved
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:39:06 PM AEST
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beautiful what a wonderful thing it is ......
Shari |
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Re: Man and Wife loved
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by garyh on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 09:23:33 PM AEST
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very nice... good idea for a write...
ps: Daylight is one word |
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Re: Man and Wife loved
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 12:06:52 AM AEST
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Beautiful....
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Re: Man and Wife loved
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:59:08 AM AEST
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| This is dreamy...so very tender and heartfelt,not to mention very sexy in a timid sorta way...ooh la la :) |
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