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Inner Core
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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People making me run at an impossible pace,
When all I really wanted was a little bit of grace,
Theyre accusing me of jealousy and deceit,
Stabbing at my heart that I have conceit,
How many times I shout I have mannerisms,
Throw back in my face is just damn criticism,
They stand me in a forum,
And claim I need decorum,
Like Im a little girl they teach me punctuation,
And hope one day Ill do an evacuation,
Whenever theyre around me I get chilblain,
Isnt it amazing I dont complain about the pain,
Why do people shout out aloud so damn invective?
Cant they be a little more respective?
On me they keep trying to crackdown,
But listen to me I wont ever break down,
Ive never thought about this before,
How everybody is bruising my inner core.
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ruby1987
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2003-09-21 20:35:00]
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Re: Inner Core
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:19:43 PM AEST
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I liked this felt like rapping along with it myself.. Great write.
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Re: Inner Core
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:02:34 PM AEST
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If only i could rap, amazing!
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