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Trust Your Heart !
Contributed by
Elizabeth_Dandy
on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Dont trust Memory,
It is too frail and fragile,
And perishable,
It does not leave the light on,
Be not contented with it!.
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Always trust your heart!
It will not fail you ever,
Cherish Images!
Till they take on vibrant life,
And prayerfully hang on!
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Elizabeth_Dandy
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Re: Trust Your Heart !
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by garyh on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 09:19:43 PM AEST
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the idea of this is really nice... i think it could be better with less "and"'s though also maybe make your stanzas a little better so it shows the rythem, something like...
Don’t trust Memory,
It is too frail, fragile,
And perishable.
It does not leave the light on,
Be not contented with it!
Always trust your heart!
It will not fail you ever,
Cherish Images!
Till they take on vibrant life
Prayerfully hang on! |
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Re: Trust Your Heart !
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 12:03:12 AM AEST
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Lovely write..and presentation..
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Re: Trust Your Heart !
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by Aika on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:54:08 PM AEST
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I have to agree, well I do
I have the same experience
only heart tells always the true
Fantastic writing!!!!! aika
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