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What can I Promise?
Contributed by
girish
on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Can I promise you the skies?
They are seen by my eyes
Can I promise you the sands?
I can carry them in my hands
Can I promise you the moon?
Reflected in the waters of a lagoon
Can I promise you the roses?
We an smell them with our noses
Can I promise you a place to remain?
As far as my heart`s domain
Can I promise you a feat?
For my legs power opponent will retreat
Can I promise you a good music?
For your ears it will be the classic
Can I promise you a crown?
For you are the queen of my town
Can I promise you an eternal life?
It may happen if you become my wife
For all this if you are ready
I promise, you are my lady
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girish
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2003-09-22 00:35:00]
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Re: What can I Promise?
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by KiSwaters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:24:03 AM AEST
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| I like the way you go into this poem, it sounds very strong with the I sound and grabbed my attention right off the bat. Nice. |
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