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A lil girl saw the sea
Contributed by
Aika
on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I saw a little girl
big blue eyes glittered
the girl walked through the city
and suddenly she saw the sea
she stopped walking and stared
stopped breathing at the moment
She shone like a star
and ran the stairs from the city, down
Ran and hurried to touch the sea
and forgot about the world completely
She took her shoes off
and slowly walked
Through the soft sand into the sea
for her it was amazing
Her feet first stepped in him
the waves gently washing her body
And spattered were her trousers
and she walked further
her knees sunk in the water
Then she turned her back
on the beach,surprised, were her friends.
She felt such satisfaction
like she touched the heaven
Like she was dreaming a dream
like a child when got her first ice-cream
In her eyes tears
she felt happiness
Looking at waves,
no borders but huge space
She smiled
standing there for a while
and when stepped on the sand
her feet were wrapped
then shoeless walking on the beach
it was the right feeling, she needed to feel
the girl, was me....
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-09-22 03:35:00]
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Re: A lil girl saw the sea
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:51:01 AM AEST
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| what a nice poem!! I enjoyed this a lot.. venkat |
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Re: A lil girl saw the sea
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by nigelangel1 on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:59:48 PM AEST
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| I know a beautiful little girl with stunning blue eyes..I saw her run to the sea, and saw her laugh and spash with glee.....Wonderful words, captured a magical moment, Aika. Nig |
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