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Forbidden Fruit
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Forbidden fruit you are so tasty Sudden urge a move so hasty Giving in to my desire Minds in turmoil, hearts afire Torn between whats right and wrong Seduced by the sound of this lustful song One wrong move and Ill be dead Thats why Im writing whats in my head Heart and soul yearns, while my soul does burn Trying to do the right thing And if I give in, to my desire World will implode, Ill be on fire And lose all that Ive fought for, and what I believe But through the haze of emotion, I might deceive The one that has my heartor at least I thought she did Restraints are breaking, needs are calling I never thought that Id be falling But what about the consequences Youve brought alive all of my senses Feel like a kid, this mixed up feeling of wanting that fruit, thats so appealing
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
(User Rating: 1 ) by incomplete on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:52:39 PM AEST (User
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Sometimes the tempting fruit can be poison, don't loose everthing for just one bite. |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:24:34 PM AEST (User
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a taste that lasts but a moment will take a lifetime to heal..... |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
(User Rating: 1 ) by drunken_ghost on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:40:29 PM AEST (User
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wow great read, only after discovering this site poetry has become fun and not just something that you have to do at school, and i think that this poem really got me thinking thanx |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:08:57 PM AEST (User
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Loved this I feel the same way. I loved this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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