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within'
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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you walk within' my mind during the hours of the day
then during the night your body finds its way
to touch the deepest part of me
letting the colours of my soul be seen
reaching out and deeply into one anothers souls
the touch and kisses that makes one feel whole
sweetly your whispers longingly of my gentle touch
surrounded within' darkness, me loving you so much
one true feeling melting within' breathing each other in
a moment begins, heart to heart, face to face, skin to skin
this freely flowing loving rhythm between two so entwined
unchained heart freely gives itself away; it is no longer mine
existing together in harmony, breathless hearts and whispers
occur
affectionate unspoken closeness belonging within' your warmth
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ladyfawn
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2003-09-22 17:35:00]
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Re: within'
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 06:04:12 PM AEST
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Geez girl..you got it bad.Isnt it wonderful? *huge smiles*
So very happy for you and Phil
All my best wishes,my biggest huggers and lotsa warm love
Sharon
This is lovely... |
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by roisin on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 06:13:00 PM AEST
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much happiness for you and phil...isn't love wonderful!!! beautiful write nessa...
rosie |
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Re: within'
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:38:18 PM AEST
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{{{{{NESSA}}}}}}}
WELCOME BAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!
I'd say what a lucky woman you are after reading such heartwarming words,but it is
HE that is lucky,to have such a warm spirit care for him!!! This piece of work he must absolutely looooove!!!! I know I sure do!!!
great job!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni 0:-) |
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Re: within'
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by Crow on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:55:38 PM AEST
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| I don`t know Phil, my best wishes to you both, Crow |
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Re: within'
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:04:33 PM AEST
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blissfully wonderful, glad to have you back
Shari |
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Re: within'
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by Merry on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:28:18 PM AEST
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wow - great write - so much LOVE!!!! Glad you found so much happiness.
merry |
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Re: within'
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:38:05 PM AEST
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Awww Grrlfriend...I'm so happy for you... I wsh you and Phil all the happiness in the world.. and then some....
So glad to have you back....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: within'
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:39:05 PM AEST
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Oh Ladyfawn,
The only words Ihave for your lovely heartwarming poem is
Exquisite Delight...I gather from the comments this is true love.....and I'm so happy for you. Many wonderful returns of the day!
lovingcritters
Connie Sue |
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Re: within'
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:52:53 AM AEST
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| Oooh, very sweet poem..simply beautiful and wonderful..good luck my friend. venkat |
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Re: within'
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:11:22 AM AEST
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| Exquisite write ... an example of true love discovered ... you are so lucky - I'm so very happy for you both ... hugs Jan |
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Re: within'
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by S_K_Williamson on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 04:44:30 AM AEST
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Nessa,
I loved this. I am so happy that you are happy.
I hope this Phil knows what a rare jewel he has.
I wish you happiness, health and joy.
beautiful write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: within'
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:39:10 PM AEST
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NESSAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so great to see you back again!!! Even though I'm sure you'd rather not be. ;) This is absolutely gorgeous, what a piece of work!! You've got it BAD! lol... Along with everyone else, I wish you and Phil all the happiness that can be squeezed into the space between 2 people. :D Hehehe... lotsa love,
~ Dee |
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Re: within'
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:51:31 PM AEST
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hi lady fawn,
one word to discribe this poem,love.
it come right through your writing.may god continue to bless you.
love,love,love. |
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Re: within'
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by Bongo on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 04:06:41 PM AEST
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Your writing is right
And your truely my light
This is just the beginning
Our meeting first innings
A few things to resolve
We are so involved
Our love will not deminish
And together our lives to lifes finish.
All my love to you xxxxxxxxxx |
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 09:01:41 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhhhh sounds like your trip was fun Im happy for you and wish you all the love your heart can handle,concrats!!
Michelle |
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by Becky on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 10:23:58 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful love story. May you and yours forever be as one. |
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Re: within'
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by apollo on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:55:30 PM AEST
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| that poem was so amazing, it really made me feel like i want to be close with my loved one at that very moment. the way you put those words together in harmony like that was all out beautiful. great poem! |
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