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Glory in all
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As time travels by we witness the stars,
they show us the way to our dreams.
Everything changes and everthing dies,
yet nothing is ever what it seem's.
So explain destiny, explain the empathy
I had with everything gone by?
The connections were draining yet beautiful.
What happens if the Sun dies?
What happens if we get too tired of this place?
Am I gifted, worthy of these steps I take?
The glory after the morning she bled was beautiful,
the Sun shon like it was Summer.
Summers gone, Winters long,
Leaves will fall, like I will into the arms of a friend.
And the Spring?
Who knows what love will blossom;
with you?
The glory of the day, the glory of the night,
for I am young, and everythings going to be alright.
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broken-glass
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2003-09-22 23:05:00]
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Re: Glory in all
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:11:34 PM AEST
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Oh Broken Glass what a beautiful upbuilding poem...How inspirational for al the young people on this site...I've missed you how have you been?
I can tell by your poetry you are doing just great!
Keep it up...your sun is shining on all of us now! It's warm and inviting and so comfy.
Wonderful write,
lovingcritters
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Re: Glory in all
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by Kalika on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:16:47 PM AEST
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so beautiful, just the lifting of spirits we all need from time to time.
Kali |
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Re: Glory in all
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by knowWhat_kind on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 05:52:29 PM AEST
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I really think that was a great poem I think we should live life to the to the very last drop. Be a kid and have fun Loved your write I can't wait to read more.
Love Sarah |
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Re: Glory in all
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:53:45 PM AEST
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| hey this is sooo good, 1 of my favourites! i love the part about the stars and the line about destiny and empathy.really great! lis xox |
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