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Symphony of temptation
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Feelings of weakness, loosened restraint
Emotional detachment, disconnect, feeling faint
Trying to focus, but feeling alone
Deafening silence atop of my throne
Focus and goals, to do the right thing
Hell in a handbasket.the pluck of the strings
Feel alone tag along
Not for long, dont feel strong
Can you help, me decide?
The path to choose, the choice of pride
Or arrogance, the final ride
Into the sunset, turn the page
A failure in love, path of rage
Pressure mounting, count the toll
Lines on the face, scars are the goal
Obsessed with perfection, lines start to blur
Temptation come hitherintensity stirs
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darkscorpio
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2003-09-23 08:35:00]
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Re: Symphony of temptation
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:15:07 PM AEST
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| omfg......you are brilliant!!!!! your work is so powerful........emotive.....hell in a handbasket.....i love it!!!!! |
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Re: Symphony of temptation
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by Kalika on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:37:51 PM AEST
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powerful and deep
Kali |
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