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taken too soon
Contributed by
razberryice
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Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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you were taken from us
way to soon
in the middle of may
when the flowers bloom
the memory of you
we hold so dear
we miss you more
each passing year
as days goes by
your missed so much
each day you lived
a heart you touched
and even though your far away
close in our hearts
is where you'll stay
Copyright ©
razberryice
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2003-09-23 14:35:00]
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Re: taken too soon
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by Kalika on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:47:58 PM AEST
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wow, wonderfully written. I can only hope that others feel the same way for me when I am gone.
Kali |
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Re: taken too soon
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 06:22:27 PM AEST
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| Heartaching, and beautiful. It's ashame of how this poem had to come about, but great poem still. |
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Re: taken too soon
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 06:51:44 PM AEST
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| what a lovely way to say you miss him!!!!! |
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Re: taken too soon
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 04:40:49 PM AEST
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So sad, but so lovely... I hope your family finds some peace in the knowledge that he is happy above..
Jenni |
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Re: taken too soon
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 04:20:43 PM AEST
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| I have also gone through something very simliar, and God, I miss him every second of my life. My heart goes out to you. |
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