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The Nobody I Hate
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
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I can't describe how much I hate you,
How much I despise all you do,
No matter where I go your always here,
Whatever I do youre always near,
I lie in bed and with out words we fight,
Even in sleep my eyes watch you all the night,
No way to escape your reach,
You know what I know I have nothing to teach,
But still you won't go away,
Even in death you shall never stray,
But from where I stand I can't see your face,
In front, behind, to the left or the right no trace,
Although an inch apart and we will die,
I'll hit you and hurt you but together we cry,
The reason I despise you is for your identity,
Youre not you, him or her but instead youre me.
I hate me for the pain I caused myself,
To my social, mental, physical wealth,
I stand there tears in my eyes blood on my wrist,
Thinking of what I threw away with a clenching fist.
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Re: The Nobody I Hate
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 04:13:11 AM AEST
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So brutal, yet beautiful. Great poem!
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Re: The Nobody I Hate
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by me on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 09:59:43 AM AEST
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| last two lines.... awesome... the antithesis of throwing something away with a clenched fist! this is a wonderful poem, but i hope that u can come to accept yourself.... it's hard, it takes a long time. meanwhile, share the lessons u learn in the process, with your poetry! |
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Re: The Nobody I Hate
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 01:06:29 PM AEST
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I like this one. Your emotion is spilling out all over the place. Hope you keep on writing your emotion.It makes for some great poetry!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: The Nobody I Hate
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:24:28 PM AEST
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wow honestly I loved this and I can relate to it so much. I loved the rhyming this was so good. I don't know what else to say...
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Re: The Nobody I Hate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 12:07:49 PM AEST
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| That is an absolutely brilliant poem. You've definately got potential. |
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Re: The Nobody I Hate
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:13:26 AM AEST
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and every one that's been through will tell you tell you the same... including me!
that cold feeling eats you alive if it's given the chance, tearing every part of you away, only...
if you had a good reason then why should it matter? o'k you can't escpape other things but neither could you if you hadn't thrown that punch!
when i did it no one wanted to know me, my school excluded me, i refuse to go back and i was permently excluded!
i ain't proud of my school record, but if i was given the chance again, i would still do it! the girl deserves all she gets!
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