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Darkness
Contributed by
deathwriter
on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness,
Dark until dawn,
I fly out under the moon,
Until the darkness is gone.
Darkness,
Is what people see,
Its all im about,
The darkness is me.
Darkness,
In magic and all,
If I worship the devil,
To darkness I will fall.
Darkness,
Brins misery to all,
Except for me,
Because misery I call.
Darkness,
Dark until dawn,
I fly out under the moon,
Until the darkness is gone.
Copyright ©
deathwriter
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2003-09-24 10:05:00]
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 10:32:32 AM AEST
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| The way you wrote it..in poem form and it rhymes even..i liked it very much....but the idea the words itself ,i dont like, because i am a chrisitan and I KNOW THAT I KNOW..IF YOUR LIFE IS LIKE THIS AND YOU DESIRE TO DO MORE WORK LIKE THIS.I KNOW THAT I KNOW THAT YOUR HEADED THERE.GOD LOVES YOU.AND MADE A PERFECT PLAN FOR YOU.IF HE WAS IN YOU.YOU WOULDNT HAVE DARKNESS IN YOUR LIFE...NOW THE DEVIL YES.SO THINK ABOUT IT...WOULD GOD WHISPER THE POEM TO YOU OR WOULD THE DEVIL..THINK ABOUT IT...LOVE YOU TO..HATE FOR YOU TO GET OFF TRACK....CHOOSE THIS DAY WHO YOU WILL FOLLOW.... |
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Re: Darkness
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by MoonlightKiss on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:25:12 PM AEST
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| i like the style too lol |
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