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horizons
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
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as i flew into the sky
i knew the reason why
we had to see each others eyes
but ohhh our time it flew right by...
i had to be within' his arms
know real warmth of his kisses and charms
and our time it flew right by
like horizons and sky...
and now i sit and miss him so
him far away, me feeling low
but i am not alone in this
for he too, misses my kiss...
if but one day could be returned
this longing strong, our loving yearned
turn back the clock to just last week
when hearts had wings with kisses deep.
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Re: horizons
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:52:03 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwoooooo!! u go girlfriend!
So sweet, precious, luving.
Great 2 see someone is getting sugars.
Thanks for all your compliments and the time u take 2 veiw my work.
Great peice of luv-n-hope!
luv u, girlfriend,
emy |
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Re: horizons
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by venkat on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 01:44:31 AM AEST
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this is where your poetry is very beautiful:
"this longing strong, our loving yearned
turn back the clock to just last week
when hearts had wings with kisses deep"
Nessa..your heart is singing like a beautiful parrot.. venkat |
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Re: horizons
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 01:50:01 AM AEST
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| This is just beautiful.Brings a tear to the eye..for a few reasons :) Im so very happy at heart for the both of you and I wish you an eternity.... forever together,watching the same horizon.Love and huggers Ness xx Sharon |
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Re: horizons
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:09:19 AM AEST
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Truly Beautiful Nessa just like you, i'm happy for you and believe me when i say i'm looking forward to christmas just as much as you are, for then i get to see you happy.
Take good care of yourself hun.
Love 'n Hugs 'n Kisses 'n Moobha's
- Becca |
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Re: horizons
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:39:44 AM AEST
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Lovely write, may you soon feel the warmth of his kisses
Shari |
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Re: horizons
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 07:22:10 AM AEST
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Ahhh Ness, this is such a delight to read. I can almost see the stars coming shining in your eyes....just as I hear the song in your voice...
Hugs...
Jenni |
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Re: horizons
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by Merry on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 07:44:20 AM AEST
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what a heartfelt poem - such wonderful memories - I'm sure you'll get together again soon - love is a beautiful thing.
un beso
merry |
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Re: horizons
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:01:11 AM AEST
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best wishes to you Ness Im so happy for you
michelle |
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Re: horizons
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by Bongo on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 10:36:13 AM AEST
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Separated by great distance
Our touch a past instance
Now kicking up commotion
With feelings of emotion
And memories of all days
Give meaning in always
And by looking ahead
With plans widespread
For this girl that i love
I thank heavens above.
Love you Ness xxxx |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:04:40 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww dammit you made me cry. :')'''''
A happy cry,because the depth of your love comes right on through my screen!!!!
You got it,and it's a good thing to have!!!
Best of luck to you both!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: horizons
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:48:27 PM AEST
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Time sure does fly by, doesn't it? It just so happens I just wrote a poem about that very concept. I also wrote another one somewhat similar to this called Closer To You... we are SO on the same page right now, it's kinda creepy, lol. At least we both know we're not alone in this whole waiting thing. I'm not sure if that helps either of us at all, lol, but it's still true either way. Anyway, I of course wish you all the best. Much love,
~ Dee |
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Re: horizons
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:06:24 AM AEST
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What a great poem,I'm happy things are great!
Keep smiling! Christina |
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Re: horizons
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by Saira on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 02:26:03 PM AEST
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So very touchy and beautiful!
Saira |
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:52:16 PM AEST
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Dearest Ladyfawn,
Nessa you never cease to amaze me, your words touch the core of my heart, sealing little cracks thus giving me hope. I'm so happy you have found someone worthy of a love like yours. Beauty beyound words does your poetry go. Thank you .
The Phantom
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Re: horizons
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by norm on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:22:48 AM AEST
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You bring back my youth with a typewriter pen
I sure would like to return again,
To my courting days, the days of the start
of my life together with Shirl which was smart. |
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Re: horizons
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 11:48:12 AM AEST
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This love is enviable, my friend. Look how many astounding poems have been birthed. May your connection always remain strong through your writing.
~Scorp |
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