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A Dark Place
Contributed by
Coquillion
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Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I come from a dark place
A stark and twisted inner space
Full of terrors undefined
That rend my soul and cloud my mind
Where wraiths of things that used to be
Come each night to torment me
They gather in my darkened room
To sneer and snigger in the gloom
And I am forced to see again
All the suffering and pain
Of those Ive driven to despair
When all they ever did was care
I come from a dark place
Of endless fears I cannot face
How I long to be at peace
How I yearn for sweet release
For a world of dark malignancy
Has risen up to swallow me
A desolate world of suffering
Filled with dreadful whispering
All hope dies as I descend
Into darkness without end
And though I scream theres no one there
No one left to know or care
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2003-09-25 04:05:00]
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Re: A Dark Place
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by Kalika on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 04:12:21 AM AEST
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I hear you my friend, I hear you....
Kali |
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Re: A Dark Place
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 08:07:16 AM AEST
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| Excellent write ... take care ... Jan |
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Re: A Dark Place
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by mystical_illusion on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 04:22:07 PM AEST
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Very good, I it liked alot - especially the last 4 lines.
-kelly |
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Re: A Dark Place
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:29:49 AM AEST
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| this brings tears to my eyes, i love this sort of poetry, and its flow just gives it an amazing effect x |
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