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flickering lights
Contributed by
Merry
on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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fighting for an ending hanging by a thread walking on the edge giving tears away standing by the fire trying to get warm admit to being lost too far away from home instead of staying put pretending it is real knowing it is not self-indulgent dreamer self-destructive act slipping into darkness watch the lights go out without asking why was this supposed to be
~merry~
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Merry
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2003-09-26 02:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: flickering lights
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 02:54:33 AM AEST (User
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cute write.. venkat |
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Re: flickering lights
(User Rating: 1 ) by hazelnut on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 04:15:39 AM AEST (User
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u have a way with words |
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Re: flickering lights
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:14:29 PM AEST (User
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quite a thought, well written. Crow |
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Re: flickering lights
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:43:40 AM AEST (User
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well written........good job!!! |
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