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ADVERSITY
Contributed by
jaeann
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Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
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Alone on the freeway
no where to turn
no sign telling me to stay
no lesson learned
walking the uphill trail
day by darkened year
take the fork of fail
there's a turn up there for fear
the rocks are big and many
the incline easy but steep
see the tails down penny
I warn you do not keep
the waterfall too fierce
the shallow parts too deep
be watchful of all you sow
to avoid the painful reap
the sky is roaring thunder
hear the eagle cry
one by one you see
the little girl parts die
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2003-09-26 04:45:00]
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Re: ADVERSITY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 05:32:55 AM AEST
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| Ominious, and painful. Awesome poem |
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Re: ADVERSITY
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by Aika on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 06:55:49 AM AEST
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Lovely and so sad
Wishing you all the best... aika:-)
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Re: ADVERSITY
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 08:54:45 AM AEST
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your words are strong and talk directly to the soul...such a sad song
Shari |
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Re: ADVERSITY
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:33:02 PM AEST
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'little girl parts die' Whats that about? Is it about puberty didn't quite understand that, but a good poem as always. Loved the imagery u painted in my head.
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Re: ADVERSITY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:49:02 PM AEST
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| J your great! i`m crazy about your writing, Crow |
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Re: ADVERSITY
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by eternityandaday4u on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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great poem! i loved it! so sad and and painful. a song sung straight to the soul! I hope you the best and great faith to you! always
TIna eternityandaday4u |
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