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Remember Me
Contributed by
Tiffany
on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 01:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Why must you push me away,
then hold me close again?
You love me or so you say,
but I see your love it fades within.
I told you not to break my heart,
To hold it in your gental hands,
but once again it falls apart,
and I am left lost in the sands.
To shed a tear would not be right,
to hold my breath would make it worse,
I must fade away from your sight,
and start upon another course.
Now just remember one last thing,
to take in all the love you see.
Now lock my heart and throw the key,
for another love to rescue me.
Copyright ©
Tiffany
... [
2003-09-26 13:25:00]
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Re: Remember Me
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 12:26:32 AM AEST
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Yes!!! Excellent and so sad but yes so true. Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Dark-Poet on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:15:58 PM AEST
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| I have also felt this pain and can totally relate and understand the emotions and suffering you have felt. This is great work. :) Keep them Comming! |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:00:06 PM AEST
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Great poem... looking forward to reading more!
keep it up
~*sErEnDiPPiTTy*~ |
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