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Do You Remember?
Contributed by
jacquelynne
on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I remember
scratching to the bottom of the hole
feeling so low
heartaching so cold
you made me feel like I had no soul
I remember
you were never here
never saved me from my fears
never even noticed my icy tears
am I the reason you were never near?
I remember
all the hurting and the pain
feeling so ashamed
with only you to blame
it's always gonna be the same
I remember
here without you in my life
you have never been by my side
so alone I'll stride
while inside I'll always cry
I remember
the bitter cold flowing through my veins
while all hope seemed far away
a thousand tears streamed down my face
as I felt my eternal pain
I remember
Do you?
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jacquelynne
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2003-09-26 23:25:00]
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Re: Do You Remember?
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by EmSal on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:55:04 PM AEST
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I feel your pain...you expressed my pain through your words here. It makes me sad that many feel this way. I'm so sorry for this. Nice poem. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: Do You Remember?
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST
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| Don't cry dear girl..please cheer up..It is beautifully written. venkat |
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Re: Do You Remember?
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:46:32 PM AEST
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| Wow. That was beautiful. Very well done. |
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