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Seasons
Contributed by
garyh
on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 06:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Cold winters Rainy springs Hot summers Fresh autumns
Changing weather all the time Raining, snowing Sunny the next day
Sleet mixed with rain Just walk through it All the same
Only a different day Another challenge
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garyh
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2003-09-27 06:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 10:51:01 AM AEST (User
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Great bit of writing! I like how you compare life to weather, because it's so true..... Great job!
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Re: Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 02:37:11 PM AEST (User
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| short, sweet and true:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:09:39 PM AEST (User
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| So true....the changing weather does reflect our lives. Great write, simplistic but meaningful. |
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Re: Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bizzy on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:08:53 PM AEST (User
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How simply you have stated this meaningful thought, garyh! So uncomplicated! I wish I had thought of that.
This is my first time to read your work. I like it very much. Bizzy |
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