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Slave
Contributed by
SinfullyTwisted
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Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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In corridors of darkness, I called your name Running through the endless mazes Of trapped dreams and broken promises But you never came And I swallowed any poison you would give No questions asked, I was your slave But the darkness stays the same And here I rot in an empty cage
Trapped in a little box of discarded fancies And branded toys you have forgotten Another item to dust and mould in its misery While you smile and seduce another soul into your outstretched arms I remember well that fatal embrace That made me yours and cursed forever One word, one look, and I had fallen A shattered mirror of the once-proud queen
And still I sit and pine for you Weeping my glassy tears Cursing your name and wishing you gone
My blood boils and I ache for the kiss That you will never again give To the empty shell of the girl I once was Shadow of a time long past
In corridors of darkness, I called your name Running through the endless mazes Of trapped dreams and broken promises But you never came And I swallowed any poison you would give No questions asked, I was your slave But the darkness stays the same And here I rot in an empty cage
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Re: Slave
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kirby on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 07:33:01 PM AEST (User
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Dear Sinfullytwisted...If this poem is actually about a time where this happened then I m in the same boat as you and know exactly what u are going through. Slaves we all are to someone though! I enjoyed this poem! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Slave
(User Rating: 1 ) by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 07:58:18 PM AEST (User
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wow, i loved this and it will make an awesome song....it conveys your feelings of hopelessness so well, i could feel many emotions mixed up into one as i read this, great write and great song
Lisa |
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Re: Slave
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 08:13:41 PM AEST (User
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Wowzers 5 stars A+ this was *****in awesome. I can relate to this in some way although not as awesomely as you described it. This was beautiful in its sadness.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Slave
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST (User
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weeping my glassy tears.....wow....so aching...so lonely and lost..... |
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