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He Dances Alone
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My thoughts of you nudge me for a reason
They keep telling me something is very wrong
And as I sit in opposition to your cold season
My springtime is silent,without song
Night time unveils misguided emotion
Scarred is the heart,yet reaches out
To you my friend,across the ocean
Lost in hallways of self doubt
It hurts that time passes silently
I wonder of ways I may be a friend
When I hear not a word,day and nightly
Yet feel your sorrow when penned
Brother of far,friend in the sky
Know that my senses are strong
I feel you in chants,I see you in pain
Don't tell me there is nothing wrong
Unexpected arrivals of lifes little visits
Can sometimes be eased with a word
I told you I care,I want to be there
But I guess you just never heard....
So until your dance of sorrow
Has finished,and then moved along
I'll sit in opposition to your cold season
My springtime silent,without song
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LovingWhispers
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:04:36 PM AEST
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I agree with you
A very lovely write
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:19:23 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, Sharon. At least he won't be stepping on your toes, lol. Hope everything goes out well =) |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:26:35 PM AEST
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Lovely, but oh so sad....
Hugs
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 06:34:55 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written ... sad, but eloquent ... Jan |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:32:19 PM AEST
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Lovely....you're a good friend to have when one is in trouble. I hope the best for him :o)
Larry |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:26:52 PM AEST
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Oh Sharon how touching, and yet inviting....never let it be said that you didn't reach out!
You did more than shout! It's only you that can change you,
How lovely, loyal, kind, fellow feeling with beautiful rhyme.,
Lovingcritterrs
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by Walt on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:32:08 PM AEST
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| In words we live to dance again. In sorrow we find the hope to pass from this day to the next. In the sunshine there is warmth. Good freinds remind each other that there is always hope and love. Great write and well crafted poem. Walt |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 10:36:47 PM AEST
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| dearest sharon, awww this is so sweetly and caringly written, i love this poem:) hugs n' love nessa xx |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 11:10:09 PM AEST
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| This is absoultely beautiful, I loved it. Amazing |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by EmSal on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:12:58 AM AEST
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If only I had a friend like you...I would surely listen!!! I have had experiences of what you are writing about...and it felt like I was being pushed away, they needed to deal with it their own way, but in the end they totally left me...and that I have pushed people away not meaning to...but I am sure this will not happen to you, well I hope it doesn't. Excellent poem. Take Care.
Love Emma. |
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Re: He Dances Alone
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by venkat on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 04:48:23 AM AEST
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Aww,it is a sad and beautiful write.,very caring you're.
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