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Ode to Sweetness
Contributed by
Walt
on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sweetness is the calling card
of those who so hate pain
it's kinda like the surpy stuff
and sometimes falls like rain
The bitterness of sister kiss
is found inside this word
it is the same as common rain,
some say it comes from a bird
Now don't get me wrong
I would not place it there,
but tell me how does rain fall
from a sky that is clear
A friend has said she'd rather be dead
than be told these passing words
kissing your lips is something like
that of kissing my sister
Copyright ©
Walt
... [
2003-09-28 21:05:00]
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Re: Ode to Sweetness
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by Hooligan785 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 03:22:48 AM AEST
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Very good poem and very Floetic....
I like your style |
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