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ALL BY CHANCE
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Never got the chance to say good-bye. Never got the chance to whisper butterflies. Never got the chance to brush away the cry. Never got the chance to be there when you died. Never got the chance to watch you fly. Never got the chance for one more morning hi. Never got the chance for a french braid try. Never got the chance to be there as you died. Never got the chance to see you two in life. Never got the chance to right a lie. Never got the chance to show you... you were mine. Never got the chance to be there when you died. Never got the chance to show you all the bright. Never got the chance to really believe the sight. Never got the chance to hold you with all my might. Never got the chance to be there when you died. Never got the chance to hear your one last sigh. Never got the chance to teach you that fair is not always right. Never got the chance to show you love every night. Never got the chance to be there when you died. Never got the chance to tell you not to forget. Never got the chance to say no, not yet! Never got the chance to wish away regret. Never got the chance to hold you when you died. Never got the chance to pay your debt. Never got the chance to worship what was lent. Never got the chance to trust you had been sent. Never got the chance to have you hold me as you died. Never got the chance..... Never got the chance..... Never got the chance.....
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2003-09-29 03:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 06:46:38 AM AEST (User
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jaeann - this is a very emotionally charged write - very sad.
merry |
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:21:22 AM AEST (User
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Omg... that is just so sad... felt like you were wringing my heart in desperation... geez. Haven't had a poem evoke a response like that from me in a while. So good job I guess! lol.
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:07:02 PM AEST (User
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so sad......... feel compelled to say try to think of the happy times with this special person, and im sure they knew they were well loved by you:) hugs n' love to you, nessa |
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:07:37 PM AEST (User
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WOWZER!! This is very emotional to say the least!!
Something we can never right is always so sad and frustrating.But for the chance to be taken by way of death is shattering in so many ways.I pray you find peace.
(((hugs)))
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:27:04 PM AEST (User
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It brings to mind this poem is true
You'll always owe when life is through
If start today to speak your mind
If someone dies, you'll be behind... |
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 06:49:08 PM AEST (User
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I can relate to this, good write. Crow |
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 01:25:12 PM AEST (User
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You made me sad :o(.....very moving write but beautifully written!!
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Re: ALL BY CHANCE
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 09:48:32 PM AEST (User
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wow
that was amazing could feel the love you once had but rember there never gone there always in your heart to stay
keep up the good work!!!! |
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