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The Leaf
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The leaf,
falls from the tree.
It sits solomn,
Solid like a rock.
When a gentle,
wind blows it away.
Blowing it,
to it's next
destination.
Waiting,
alone for
another leaf
to come along,
and talk to,
until it's blown
away again,
to it's next
destination.
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sugar0986
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2003-09-29 05:05:00]
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Re: The Leaf
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 05:54:09 PM AEST
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Sugar,
I love how you can take an ordinary thing and spin it to be beautiful. I just read "Nightfall" two seconds ago, and I loved that one too. This leaf poem's got a real similarity towards life. I might be overanalyzing, but I think it symbolizes people, when we wait and wait for someone to come along and keep us company. That's just my thoughts on the subject =)
Fabulous write as usual!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jelly |
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