|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Against the Odds
Contributed by
art1st
on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Against the Odds
I feel the morphing chaos
That controls the data streams
A thunderstorm in the synapses
Giving brief flashes of awareness
In the calm grey of my eyes
Imaginative intuition of the id
Reaching across the chasm
To slap my impotent ego
Into a mind-wiping epiphany
That I am not a by-product
To be secretly disposed of
By clandestine social ignorance
But that I am an uncanny masterpiece
Perfectly flawed through
Accidental bio-chemical experimentation
My existence is a cosmic long shot
Not to be taken for granted
I must drive this bloody mass
Like a personal juggernaut
And avoid the peer pressure
To fall in and behind
On this conveyor belt highway
That sits motionless and crowded
With the congregated flock that refuses
To entertain the concept of living
Copyright ©
art1st
... [
2003-09-29 05:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Against the Odds
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 08:22:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
interesting write and great words to live by thanks for sharing
michelle |
|
|
Re: Against the Odds
(User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 08:24:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
WOW! Superb!!! i really enjoyed..
only.. that self-discovery result is really yours and real? i wish to you, it was much better and nicer... aika:-)
|
|
|
Re: Against the Odds
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:24:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A little wordy but a very entertaining read. "Perfectly flawed" - I love it! I'm gonna use that!! lol
~ Moonlit |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
