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A Homes Abandoned Core
Contributed by
Dragons_Of_Rose
on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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Silent oak floors snuggle beneath years of blanketed dust
Occasionally awakening to a droplet of sunlight or two
The windows give way to natures whispers and gusts
Bringing offers of nourishment with mornings dew.
Antique papered walls painfully peel in their nights
Showing heightened years of wear and tear
Bearing the darkened notches of a homes sight
The eyes that clutch stories of all captured there.
Strong families with high richly estates
Murders of those once thought deprived
Young loves exploring behind closed gates
The homeless on which sadness thrived.
It's all buried here within these walls
The chamber of a homes abandoned core
Forgotten tales confined within its halls
Permanently etched beneath a dusty oak floor.
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2003-09-30 11:35:00]
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Re: A Homes Abandoned Core
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by Philipa on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 12:47:51 PM AEST
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Yes, I really liked this one. I've often had the same thoughts in some of the homes I have lived in myself. Your imagery is wonderful "Antique papered walls painfully peel" for example. Very nice,
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Re: A Homes Abandoned Core
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 04:23:32 PM AEST
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| I agree. Wonderful imagery. You capture it beautifully. Well done, and keep writing. |
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Re: A Homes Abandoned Core
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 08:38:25 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write ... great imagery ... Jan |
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