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Out In The Open
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Out In The Open
I lay all my feelings,
Out in the open.
Where there are no words,
Laid to rest.
I lay my heart,
Out in the open,
Im putting our love,
To the test.
I lay my life,
Out in the open.
I am now willing,
To take the chance.
I lay myself,
Out in the open.
For our relationship,
To enhance.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2003-09-30 22:45:00]
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Re: Out In The Open
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by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 04:14:11 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this J. |
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Re: Out In The Open
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by thegurl on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:03:21 AM AEST
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| i liked this a lot, it is rare a guy can risk himself for a relationship |
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Re: Out In The Open
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by Philipa on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:40:18 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing such a personal poem. They are hard to write and harder to share. Well written.
Philipa
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