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A Walk
Contributed by
walt
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Three of us
went walking through
the shadows of my mind
Two were good friends
the third my life sign
Corridors are narrow
and the path a maze
two of us just stop
in awe of this place
My life sign
he just pushes on
for him there is no narrow
just the open rung
Windows locked and shuttered
doors all closed tight
two us were willing
and still there is a fight
A kiss upon my forehead
a squeeze of my hand
a smile even a child
could understand
My path is never set
I'll change my ways
Three of us
went walking
in the shadows
of my mind
only one returned
it was my life sign
My god, the bottle,
lay broken in the street
my life had passed before me
and died at my feet
Today I stand alone
no crutches, need I
For now
I walk alone
in the void of my mind
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walt
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2003-10-01 00:05:00]
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Re: A Walk
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:24:34 AM AEST
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Hooley dooley..you're good!!!
This is art! |
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Re: A Walk
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:14:31 PM AEST
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Wow...this is so great! Loved it!
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Re: A Walk
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:23:10 PM AEST
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| quite a write, I like this. Crow |
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