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My devoted Dog, My best friend
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
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I know your only a dog,
but to me your much more,
I realized that when I helped you get out the door,
for your little legs got so weak one day,
so bad you could'nt get up to walk away,
You saw me crying in fear,
so you came up to wipe my tear,
The vet said you might need surgery,
If the pills were not doing the duty,
I have to help you walk outside,
each time I do I have cried,
just to see you in so much pain,
makes me want to go insane,
I just want my Fraiser back again,
the dog thats been my best friend,
You turned only 4 that day,
the day you could'nt run & play,
you hurt your spine,the doctor said,
you need to stay home in your bed,
You look so sad,but still you know,
I'm here to help,that I show,
you kiss my cheek,to say thank you,
for all I've done,like you knew,
was to help you get better,to play again,
my devoted dog,My best friend!
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2003-10-01 14:35:00]
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Re: My devoted Dog, My best friend
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 02:56:37 PM AEST
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| awww christina! poor (((((fraiser))))) i hope he feels better soon and doesnt need the surgery, your poem for him is beautiful and loving, what would we do without our furkids!? ...dont wanna know... and i know what you mean, no matter what happens they still give those sweet kisses:) hugs, woofies, n' lotsa love to you and fraiser! nessa xx |
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Re: My devoted Dog, My best friend
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:42:34 PM AEST
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| my heart, sweet write. i hope he`s better. Crow |
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Re: My devoted Dog, My best friend
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:41:37 PM AEST
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| I've never had a pet, so I can't really relate, but I loved the poem anyways. Great job! |
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Re: My devoted Dog, My best friend
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 09:51:44 PM AEST
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wonderful poem I can relate I had a dog "Lady" who was diabetic and I had to give her shots...it is so tough to see them suffer
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Re: My devoted Dog, My best friend
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by venkat on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:20:12 AM AEST
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Ah..very sweet write..kind hearted lady.
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Re: My devoted Dog, My best friend
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 04:39:26 PM AEST
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ah Christina I know this is ripping you apart. Im saying a prayer for a pain eased recovery for him and for you. Little puppy LeShae says woof woof roooof ruf ruf which means kisses and doggy slobber get well soon.
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