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The Cries of Angels
Contributed by
lastwaltz
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Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mary always seems like she's waiting for something
But she doesn't seem much to mind
There's something in her smile that whispers
She's got nothing but time.
She tenderly keeps her bar at night
Keeping each bottle clean and in its place on the shelf
And every now and then, you can catch her mumble
"I miss you so much" to herself.
No one's sure what her story is
She doesn't look like one with much to hide
But there's something about the way's she's closed
That makes you wonder what you'd see if she opened wide.
I guess we all have our secrets
Our failures, sorrows, and unfinished dreams
But there's a war going on inside Mary
That turns her silence into haunting screams.
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lastwaltz
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2003-10-01 18:05:00]
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Re: The Cries of Angels
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:08:53 PM AEST
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| Very well done. Larry |
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Re: The Cries of Angels
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:29:16 PM AEST
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WOW! In English class we're studying emotional isolation. D'ya mind if I read it during class? Of course you'll get full credit, I'd never try to pass it off as mine, but I just think it captures the essences of isolation so perfectly. Send me a message, or something, b/c I'd love to share this. It was absolutely stunning!
Mail me soon!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess |
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Re: The Cries of Angels
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by Becky on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:50:45 PM AEST
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| This is great! |
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Re: The Cries of Angels
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 10:56:33 PM AEST
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| Wow this was really great! We all do keep secrets inside somewhere! Christina |
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Re: The Cries of Angels
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:30:51 AM AEST
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| very neat utterance |
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Re: The Cries of Angels
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 09:50:13 AM AEST
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"But there's something about the way's she's closed
That makes you wonder what you'd see if she opened wide."
True poetry..it has a story,paints a picture ,and really moves the reader.Makes me want to sit with Mary sometime.This is a terrific piece. |
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