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Waves
Contributed by
humphdj
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Saturday, 17th August 2002 @ 07:09:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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O to be upon the sea
Beyond this race of fools
Repair the damage heal the pain
Revisit memories pools
This race we run begins at birth
And ends within our graves
I need to stop and find some peace
And rest upon the waves
Great winds speak softly to my sails
For I am at your will
Take up the tiller plot my course
Whilst I my strength refill
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humphdj
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Re: Waves
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by Patricia_Petro on
Saturday, 17th August 2002 @ 10:29:29 PM AEST
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Hi Dave,
Beautiful poem...I like it a lot. I always appreciated the healing power of water...its sound and the feel of sea breezes. You said it very nicely here.
~Patricia xx |
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Re: Waves
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 01:57:11 AM AEST
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Lovely, Dave...The sea has that soothing effect on me also. (Thank God, it is just a stone's throw away)... I enjoyed this... Thanks also for your continued support.
Hugs,
Jenni... |
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Re: Waves
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 03:18:43 AM AEST
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I love this other, more reflective side of your personality Dave...this is beautiful
Chrissie x |
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Re: Waves
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by chatabox on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 10:31:25 PM AEST
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a soft soothing solution indeed. I hope the calming winds and the gentle waves refresh you my friend.
Lovely poem
Pen. |
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Re: Waves
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 01:30:56 AM AEST
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Dear Dave @-<-<<
A perfect poem.. great to see you here; your style is wonderful as I remember and so enjoyed this one:)
Your friend Always Nessa |
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