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Circle of Life
Contributed by
gee
on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The stillness of the rushes
in the early morning light
awaits the kiss and caress
of the cool winds across the water
All life stands still
to the rising of the sun
save the ever-wary hungry fish
which breaks the glassy plane
Reflecting light on gleaming scales
launched high above the wash
catch a butterfly in flight
as he claims his meaty prize
Just as quick and out of sight
as dust devils between the dunes
the ripples in the water cede
once more, life carries on
Copyright ©
gee
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2003-10-02 05:05:00]
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Re: Circle of Life
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by Philipa on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:42:58 PM AEST
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Very good poem. Nice imagery and flow. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Circle of Life
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 04:42:47 PM AEST
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I must agree this is a peaceful flowing peace of work makes me feel calm which is what I need this week for sure.Thanks for sharing this
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Re: Circle of Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:24:00 AM AEST
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Gee...This one is really lovely. The words just flow across the page with such ease... Very beautiful....
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