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ETERNITY
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Every day Im living
In a smiling false disguise
But you know Im different
You see it in my eyes
And from the look upon your face
I see youre not impressed;
Im a great little actor
Until I get undressed
Cause then youll see the scars
I try to keep unseen
The scars upon my body
That remind me where Ive been
Another secret
I keep out of sight
Is I cut myself
Nearly every night
I may not be sweet
I may not be kind
And I may be slightly
Unstable of mind
But you say Im selfish
And I have to ask, why?
You must be selfish
If you wont let me die
Do you feel guilty?
Do you feel bad?
Do you really want to know
Why I was sad?
I bet you dont
But if you feel like me
Come join me and well rest for
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2003-10-02 17:45:00]
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Re: ETERNITY
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:10:35 PM AEST
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| Sent shivers up my spine. Great write. It really spoke to me. |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:18:20 PM AEST
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wow this is intense
michelle |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:21:52 PM AEST
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| emotive this is.......great job..... |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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Sounds so familiar to me. I love how you wrote this out, especially the ending. Beautifully done, Great poem
*_-Psych-_* |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 02:28:49 PM AEST
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This really was a great poem...you explained yourself very well! Great job!
~*~Nessa~*~ (adidaschic04@sbcglobal.net) |
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