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Something ruffled
Contributed by
Aika
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Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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something ruffled
in my bed
quivering,but what is that?
a lil bird? or his nest?
nonono! it is a head!
a head of a kiddie
or it just seems to be..
where does he have
his body and legs?
wondering and letting my fingers
to sneak under his cover
touching slowly and carefuly
Oh! Ive got it!
Something tiny soft
tickling a little and still more
This kiddie suddenly shaking
and his body uncovering
His lil mouth
with wide smiles
and blueberries of his eyes
and voice of angel
reveal him whole
Now you can not hide
my little Mat
wake up baby
come on to your mom:-)
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-10-02 19:35:00]
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Re: Something ruffled
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:55:19 PM AEST
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| aww..they can be so warm and cuddly sometimes!!!!! |
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Re: Something ruffled
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 10:13:34 PM AEST
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very sweet
Shari |
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Re: Something ruffled
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:50:49 AM AEST
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| what a cute write, Crow |
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Re: Something ruffled
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:37:10 AM AEST
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How touching and neat!
A loving Mothers feat!
Little guys love to sleep
with Mom and Dad!
How great your love for your son.
It just shines right through with fun!
I loved this Aika....
It was so You!
lovingcritters
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Re: Something ruffled
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:28:20 PM AEST
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| adorable:) hugs n' love nessa |
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