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Song for John
Contributed by
kalika
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Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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Hush now baby,
Please don't cry,
Come closer now,
Let me dry your eyes.
Dont you see darling,
I will be fine,
But if your heart aches
Then so does mine.
Lay your head on my bosom,
Close your eyes tight,
I will do all that I can,
To make things right.
I want to ease your heart,
Take away this pain,
But you must do this yourself,
Only you can ascertain.
So I will do what I can,
To show I am here for you,
Always at your side,
I will help you see this through.
I have not much to offer,
Only this simple lullaby,
I hope it is enough,
To help you get by.
Copyright ©
kalika
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2003-10-02 20:05:00]
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Re: Song for John
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by HelixGreg on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 09:17:45 PM AEST
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if i was a baby i would feel so loved by this, you obviously really love john. great work.
-Helix(my name really isn't greg... mwahahaha) |
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Re: Song for John
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by EmSal on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:38:23 AM AEST
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Oh Kalika it is so sad to know about this kind of thing - losing a friendship...you expressed how much you appriciated him through your words. Quote - "But if your heart aches, then so does mine" - Oh this is lovely!!! I also feel this way. So sad. Lovely write.
Emma.
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Re: Song for John
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:29:52 PM AEST
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| very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Song for John
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 08:10:01 AM AEST
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This is beautiful and heartfelt. I would love to hear it set to music.
Stitch |
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