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Life is worth
Contributed by
Aika
on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The night is slowly leaving
The moon asked the sun for shining
The nature is yawning
The animals start running,
The birds singing
The flowers and trees smelling sweetly
Before you open your eyes
Dreams shortly about this natural paradise
Then soft breeze caresses your face
So you wake up and find out that
The life is worth all troubles
And is still so full of wonders
Still so many reasons why to live
Why to start shining since the very morning
Many reasons to right now smile
And also to dream an every free while.:-)
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-10-02 20:25:00]
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Re: Life is worth
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by HelixGreg on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 09:20:05 PM AEST
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I love the last 2 lines. Good job!
-Helix(my name really isn't greg... mwahahaha) |
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Re: Life is worth
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 10:12:19 PM AEST
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Lovely
Shari |
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Re: Life is worth
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:48:26 AM AEST
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| very good write, Crow |
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Re: Life is worth
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:33:14 AM AEST
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Aika, that was so loving, so upbuilding, and so inspirational....How very lovely indeed!
Gave me every reason to be alive.
I loved it Aika.
Your poetry is just getting better and better
Lovingcritters
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Re: Life is worth
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:44:04 PM AEST
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| very beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Life is worth
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 09:05:32 AM AEST
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| Keep on dreaming Aika............you dream so well xx steve |
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