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The Way
Contributed by
reason
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Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Time a go I found a way,
Long and dirty, filled with rain,
Youre the one, who brought me there,
Youre the one, who got me scared.
Slipping, falling there I was
Going down that road alone.
All the questions that arose
Never bound to answer.
When I thought Im almost there,
Youre the one who pushed me farer.
I was walking now again
With the tears that made it harder.
Now were standing face to face,
With no gap between us.
It seems as youre looking at my face
With a different feeling.
Those whore standing behind me
With a finger pointed at me.
Those whore laughing behind me
Without a clear thought what I can be,
Are the ones who you choose
To be your judges for free.
Your choice is your way,
So are you coming with me?
Copyright ©
reason
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2003-10-03 00:45:00]
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Re: The Way
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:37:48 PM AEST
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| you make me feel as if i'm walking in darkness.........good piece.... |
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Re: The Way
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by Tanna on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 10:53:11 AM AEST
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I've re-read this poem 3 times now. My 1st impression was "This is a VERY strong person". After the 3rd time I read it, the impression remained. I have a feeling that despite the sadness, you have steel threaded through your spine.
Excellent write
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