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Forgive the poor Poet
Contributed by
norm
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Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
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There was a time I could have stated,
on the subject of comments related,
If a poet can sigh, as senseless as I,
Then I'll bury the comments I hated.
The point is sometimes, I get me too cute
And hurt someone's feelings too much, to boot,
Believe when I say, I intend not this way
My gibes should be a touch more astute.
I'm a kidder, a jester, an all around pest
I don't mean to harm, only add zest,
But sometimes I mar by going too far,
It's hard to abate a really good jest.
I said enough if you read all my stuff,
There in the rough, most of it's puff,
Forgive and forget, "Hail Fellow well met"
And don't go away in a huff.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-10-03 01:35:00]
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:11:32 AM AEST
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Oh, Norm you need not apologize.
Nor even eulogize,
For we know you are a just a lover.
A poet who wouldn't hurt, but just hover.
We all love you dearly I must say
And we would never take your jest in the wrong way!
Now please don't be hurt and run away....
YPDC would be so sad, so please stay!
We love you and didn't you say....we should feel sorry for the poet. I'll say that then and everyone will then know it.
I feel sorry for you Norm....you're a darn good poet!
I throw roses at your feet, and then retreat!
lovingcritters and poets too!
ConSue |
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:57:01 AM AEST
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Sometimes our comments are misconstrued
Without our voices,expression we lose
Just typing a comment,can leave a bad smell
When really we meant a nice LOL
Well expressed..even without the voice ;) |
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 04:13:33 AM AEST
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I take not you seriously
Sometime I laugh deleriously
When your comments are seen
I know you are not mean
Your heart is grand
I am glad you are my friend
Apoligies are not needed
But your sentiment is heeded
Shari
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:15:36 PM AEST
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Your words ring true as a tolling bell,
May negative comments go to h*ll!
This site is uplifting,because of our Norm.
It won't be ruined by a passing storm.
Keep up the great work,give it your best,
Rid your mind of worrisome pest!
Tis' your friends,who love your fun,
So again I'll say "Love you,hon"!!! 0:-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:05:50 PM AEST
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| dearest norm, your the best and a bright place in my life and heart, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:35:24 PM AEST
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i always appreciate you.... comments galore
i never really know what you have in store
what you do say is never a bore
you lay it on the line... we get the score
we'll never on you, shut the door
through your words we know your core
the kidder, the norm, that's what poet friends are for!!! |
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Re: Forgive the poor Poet
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by Scott on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:39:12 PM AEST
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a good, steady, rhyme scheme with good subject matter. well done.
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