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A Whisper Upon The Wind
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'll always be happy I had you And I'm sure I'll always miss you At least the you you used to be I'll always look back on it and smile 'Cause you and me, we went the mile That was the way it used to be
I'll never forget the memories I loved the way you needed me I'd do it all over again I'll never wish it turned out different Or that to me you were never sent And I'm glad I let you in
It hurts right now but I'll be okay I wouldn't have it any other way I wouldn't change a thing I'm gonna let you go Even though I thought it would never end I can't go on, I simply can't pretend But I loved every moment And I'll never look back
I'm glad I got to have you in my life It's time to say goodbye tonight It's been over for some time now I guess he was right, it just can't last The good times are all in the past I understand it's right somehow
It's fate, I know, and I'll move on It hurts in a way like it's already gone Like a whisper upon the wind It was special and it was great Something I'll always appreciate So I'l hold on to it within
I'll never forget it was you who got me through You showed me so much I needed you to I'm no less who I am Just 'cause I'm without you You made me special and I always will be You were there when I needed you to be It was worth every second I have no regrets
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-10-03 03:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:50:05 AM AEST (User
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Such a positive write..Nice one. |
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Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kalika on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:50:05 AM AEST (User
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such a powerful baring of yourself, I enjoyed it very much
Kali |
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Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST (User
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With such lovely words you write,how do you ever get *negative* comments. Your talent is quite evident and it shines in all the poetry you write. Keep up the good work!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:12:14 PM AEST (User
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you sound very strong here, yes, always be grateful for knowing someone and being so close...... excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa xx |
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Re: A Whisper Upon The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:28:57 PM AEST (User
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you spoke the words i need to say to a friend......wow....great write!!!! |
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