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Bite Me
Contributed by
Merry
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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chewed on - red lights for eyes
pin prick of sensation
blood curdling scream
was that you in the distance
slip under your spell
entranced
limp as a rag doll
sweet milk of humanity
suck until I am dead
everything turns over
new leaf
wasted feeling of lethargy
drink water from a tin cup
dreamland they said
tied to the bed
watch her carefully
full moon
heart pounding
unanswered need
pray over her
blood runs down her chin
what is that iron taste
bit off my tongue
couldnt help myself
was it true or false
true or false
true or
not everything he said
his lost soul
calling her
to ride with him
taste eternity
hunting for her
he is seeking her again
she is tied to the bed
red lights for eyes watching him
~merry~
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Merry
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2003-10-03 03:45:00]
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Re: Bite Me
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:53:39 AM AEST
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creepy lol
Im more into witches myself..gotta love those spells ;) |
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Re: Bite Me
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by venkat on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 06:36:18 AM AEST
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| very dark..just iron taste..venkat |
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Re: Bite Me
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by Crow on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:38:36 PM AEST
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| this is dark, cool write. Crow |
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Re: Bite Me
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:53:04 PM AEST
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| great, love the vivid images here:) hugs n' love nessa x |
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Re: Bite Me
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:26:51 PM AEST
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| ooooooooo creepy good write.....this has such a sensual feel to it..... |
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Re: Bite Me
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 07:36:07 PM AEST
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| I love dark poems ... this is sensual and chilling all at once ... great write ... Jan |
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