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Dreamworld
Contributed by
Scott
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Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
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oops
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More and more each day I tire
Of the world around me, so I aspire
To create one of my own
A place where I can go alone
Where there is neither love nor hate
Do distract me while I contemplate
Anything that comes to mind
No day or night or passing of time
But this world is not something you can see or feel
For it is only in my dreams at night that this world is real
So every night-or so it would seem
I sleep and live, then wake up and dream.
Copyright ©
Scott
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2003-10-03 11:35:00]
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Re: Dreamworld
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 04:13:01 PM AEST
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ive often felt that way in my past
great poem
putter |
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Re: Dreamworld
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 05:10:01 AM AEST
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| the rhyming patterns in your poems up to now are very similar, dont get me wrong they're very good you are very good at rhyming words but maybe you should change the pattern, or is that just your style.... |
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